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PAGE 23 初三英语书面表达中考指导 Topic 1 :环保题材 Sample Writing 假设你是悉尼大学一名华裔学生，名叫Jason Wu。你从China Daily上看到该报正在开展主题为Change for a Better China的环保讨论活动。你打算结合自己所居住的小镇的变化，给报社写一封英文信参与讨论。内容提示见下表： 注意事项： 1．英文信须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．表格中“感想建议”一栏须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．词数在90个左右，信的首尾己在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4．信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 小镇概况 Hart-well, 人口约5，0000，?“澳洲最美小镇”之一 过去状况 当地人冬天燃木取暖，引起空气污染、树木被伐 应对措施 应阻止此类活动，鼓励使用清洁能源 感想建议 …… 参考词汇： 澳洲最美小镇(Australias Nicest Towns) 清洁能源(clean energy) 【答案】 Dear Editor, I am a student of Sydney University. I am living in a small town called Hart-well with a population of around 5000.It is one of the “Australia’s Nicest Towns”. But things were very different in the past. The local people used to burn wood to keep their houses warm in winter. That caused serious air pollution and a lot of trees were cut down. Laws were soon made to stop this and people were encouraged to use clean energy. I think we can do something similar in China. Perhaps we can start with using less oil. I believe we can make our world a better place if we keep trying. Yours sincerely, Jason Wu 【解析】 本篇作文要求根据提示，介绍所居住的澳洲小镇的情况、过去人们的习惯以及对环境的影响和采取的措施等等。首先分析一下时态：介绍小镇概况，使用一般现在时态；介绍过去的状况，使用一般过去时；应对的措施和感想建议，可以使用一般现在时态，甚至是一般将来时态(如有必要的话)。 【写作亮点】短文内容包括了表格中的所有提示内容，语句通顺、意思连贯，特别是第2句中的called，用过去分词作定语，以及后面的with短语，使用灵活。文章中还准确地使用了一些被动结构，句式不拘泥，encourage sb. to do, start with doing, keep doing sth.等结构使用恰当；另外还添加了诸如 But things were very different in the past. 等连接过渡语，使得整篇文章衔接到位。 Useful Expressions Its our duty to protect the environment. We should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. We should save water and electricity by turning off the taps, fans, lights and Tv sets in time when we dont need them. Whats more Water should be reused. It is good to make full use of paper. We should use both sides of the paper. Remember to go shopping with a basket instead of plastic bags. Lower carbon, happier life. Lets take action We have only one earth. The population on earth is b