脱险读后续写之人与自然知识点积累学案-高三英语作文复习写作专项.docxVIP

脱险类读后续写之人与自然

（2016.10.浙江野外迷路）文章大意为夫妻二人去露营，因为吵架女人独自离开，却在森林中迷路。

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.?①dark的环境描写：Immediately,(一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林)?②Jane的反应(do,feel,say)：Jane,(疲劳又害怕),

(躺下)nearastone,(想念)herfamily?atadistance.Allthefantastic(记忆涌上心头)andshe(忍不住哭泣),“Hadn’tI(争吵)with?Tom,?(走开)and?(爬)?tothehighplace,Iwouldn’t(陷入)thisawfulplace,(面临)withthedangerofdying.”She(后悔)withendless(焦虑),andthenbecame(睡着了)withshiningtearsinhereyes.

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.①Jane的反应:(虚弱)asshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuing(寻找援助).?(让她高兴得是),②直升机和Jane的互动：a?helicopter?was

(飞过头顶)againandagain.(渴望又激动),she

(挥动)her?yellowblouse?and(竭尽全力去喊)soastoattractothers’attention.Fortunately,shewaseventually(被注意到)and

(被带)intothehelicopter.③她丈夫的反应：There,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionof(如释重负).④最后：Astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwas(太激动以至于不能说任何的话).Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain.Thatday?wassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinJane’smemoryforever.

好句仿写：?①Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes. 她后悔了伴着无尽的焦虑，然后眼里闪着泪光睡着了。

(他盯着我伴着巨大的感激，然后眼里闪着泪光笑了)

②Astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwastoothrilledtosayanything.她尽可能紧紧地拥抱她并且太激动以至于说不出任何话。

她尽可能紧紧地握住我的手并且太害怕以至于说不出任何话。

答案P1：anabsolutedarknessruledtheforestexhaustedandscaredlaydown

missingmemorycrowdedincouldn’thelpcryingquarreledwalked?away

climbedbetrappedinconfrontedregrettedanxietyasleeprelief

P2:WeaksearchingforassistanceTohergreatjoyflyingoverhead