四川省成都市二诊应用文写作短文投稿课件(共15张PPT).pptxVIP

【2024级成都二诊?书面表达】;你校英文报正举行以“ThePowerofSmile”为题的征文比赛，请结

合自身经历写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.自身经历；2.你的感悟。

注意：;1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。

ThePowerofSmile

审题

体裁：短文(夹叙夹议文)——微笑的力量

时态：一般过去时/一般现在时

人称：第一人称/第三人称

谋篇布局

结构：1.事例→观点；2.观点→事例；3.观点→事例→观点;写作难点：

1.smile一词是指微笑这个表情动作还是引申含义？(eg.面对困难、挫折

等不轻易放弃，乐观勇敢面对?);重难点突破;Apossibleversion

Therearetimeswhenasmallactioncanmakeabigdifference.

Smileisjustoneofthemandmyrecentexperiencehasdeepenedmy

understandingofitsmagicalpower.;ThePowerofSmile

Therearetimeswhenagestureassimpleasasmilecando

wonders,lightingupsomeoneinthedarknessandevenhealingthe

soul.

Overwhelmedbythestressfrommypooracademicperformance,

Iwasonthevergeofbreakingdown.Noticingmyfrustration,Shelly,

mybestfriendcametoofferafewwordsofcomfortbutIwasin

suchlowspiritsthatIblurtedoutsomesharpwordsandsheran

awayweeping.Regrettably,IwastooashamedtoapologizeandI

;couldntfeelworse,whichthrewmeintoaworldofdarkness.The

momentIsawherapproachingthenextday,Iloweredmyhead

immediately,tryingtoshunher/avoidherdeliberately.However,she

stoppedmeandgavemeahug.WhenIlookedup,Imetasmiling

face,assweetasflowersinthespring/asgentleasasummerbreeze.

Atthatmoment,allmyanxietyanddepressionmeltedaway.

Whenwordsfail,smilespeaks.;2.establish/forgeacloserelationship/rapport/tieswithsb.与某人建立亲

密的关系

(①connectwithsb./bondwithsb.②build/create/forgeaspecialbond

withsb.);9.offerafewwordsofcomfort说上几句安慰的话语;情绪情感描写;17.TheinstantIsetmyeyesontheresult,Ifeltalumpinmythroat

如哽在喉/mythroattightened,sorrowfultearsblurringmyvision.;22.Standingontheplatform/stage,Ibecameincreasinglyembarrassed

andcouldfeelmyheartbeating/poundingwildly,myfaceburning.;安慰、鼓励