读后续写课件（use CDE 修改） -2025届高三上学期英语作文复习专项.pptx

Welcometoourschool!Continuationwriting—UsingCDEtorevise（修改）yourcomposition

Wewill:knowaboutthewritingmethodCDEforcontinuationwriting.useCDEtoreviseyourcomposition.Agoodcompositionisrevised,notwritten.—FromHarvardUniversity

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WhatisCDE?themedevelopmentcharactersemotionsWhathappened?WhatwouldCdo?Whatwastheresult?Developtheplotofthestory

Pre-CDE:theme、theforeshadowing(伏笔）,conflicts(冲突)andechoes(呼应）beginningdevelpmentclimaxendingTheplotofmaineventofthestoryMainidea:whenwhere,who,whatandhow(何时何地何人做了何事，结果如何）

Pre-CDE:thecharactersandsituation

While-CDE:reasonableandpositiveRanjanrodethemotobikewithmedowntheroadA?dog?rushed?out?and?ran?across?the?road?/We?picked?up?the?motobike?and?found?one?mirror?was?missingRanjan?and?I,?the?dogWhat?would?C?do?Whatwastheresult?How?would?C?feel?Echoing(呼应）withthethemeandliftupthethemesignificanceEnding

Chrishlifeandstayawayfrombeingcool.Thethemesignificance:attitudeandvalue

While-CDE:languagestyleandtechniques1.Overnight,Ranjanhadbecomeaprinceamongusboys.2.Ranjan,liketherestofus,kneweverythingaboutthemotorbike,everypartofit.Buttorideitwasanotherstory.3.Helookedaroundcarefully,pusheditdowntheroad,andstartedit.

Thechecklist:（在你的作文中删除或修改或增加信息）自评要素关键词情节是否合理CDE：characters,development,emotions语言是否准确拼写和语法是否有错误逻辑是否清晰一系列小事件的先后顺序和因果关系主题是否突出紧紧围绕主题，主要人物和主要事件，结尾升华主题语言表达技巧心动句型：细节描写，修辞，好词好句

Thecharmofliteraryworksliesinthelivedetaileddescription.Thedetaileddescriptioncomesfromcarefulobservationandexperienceoflifewithyourheart.Thefeelingsarethesouloftheworks.——UnknownLearntoobservelifecarefullyandpourallyouremotionsintoyourworksandformahabitofreadingclassics.

Homework:Writeyourcompositionneatlyandbeautifully,Putthemonthewalloftheclassroomtomorrow!