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2011年高考英语分类汇编——书面表达 1.（2011·陕西卷）书面表达（满分30分） 假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。 I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong? 写作要点： 1.表明自己的看法； 2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）； 3.提出至少两条建议 要求： 1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。 Hi, TigerMom， What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. 【思路点拨】本题是一个开放性作文，试题要求考生回复一篇博客，而作文的体裁通过给出首句已经给出，考生需要做的是先要读懂博文的意思，并且要明确试题的要求，有针对性的做出回复。文章主体时态是一般现在时，主体人称应用第三人称。在书写时尤其要注意文章的内容要点，并且恰当地使用好过渡性词汇，使行文的逻辑性和连贯性得以很好的体现，并适当的使用主从复合句等较复杂的结构和较高级的词汇，以提高自己书面表达的档次。 【优秀范文】 One possible version: Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some straight-A students in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do. 【亮点回放】范文结构准确，题材符合试题中的要求，内容要点齐全，尤其是先对于现象进行了由针对性的分析，然后提出了行之有效的解决办法，并按照材料的要求提出了两点以上的建议，很好的完成了试题的要求，并且使用了一些较高级的词汇和较复杂的结构，过渡性词汇的使用准确，行文连贯，由很强的逻辑性。 2.（2011·全国II）书面表达（满分30分） 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给