高考英语开放作文讲解1.ppt

开放作文 开放作文 （15分，分为四档） 第一档：13---15 第二档：9---12 第三档：4---8 第四档：1---3 以内容和语言定档定分 第二档（9—12）基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、逻辑和交际等方面基本符合要求；所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（4—8）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。表达未能切题；所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对写作内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。 开放作文评分原则: 以内容和语言定档定分 ◆ 立意明确，逻辑清晰 (立意-----细节描述） ◆ 语言达意 2010年北京卷 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. 立意1：勇于克服困难 （小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长） 立意2：成功来自于不懈的努力 （小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光） 立意3：多给孩子成长的空间。 （楼房的不规则造成了小树的扭曲） 立意----细节描述 * 2010年开放式作文 （生活*社会*......） 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. 立意----细节描述 把图中的内容描述清楚 —— 4 - 6分 过渡句 —— 1 - 2分 含义 —— 2 - 5分 1 描图句 In the picture,… The picture shows that… As can be seen from the picture, As we can see in the picture, From the picture I can see … As is (vividly) shown in the picture ,…. 怎样用语言描述图片？ 在描述图片时，推荐一下三种模式： a. 常量主语推进模式 例1： What an interesting picture it is ! (What a strange picture it is!) A tree is twisted by two closely-located buildings. It bends in the middle. But it struggles (tries its best) all the way to reach the sky (the Sun). What an interesting picture it is! (How interesting this picture is!) A tree is encircled (surrounded) by two closely-located buildings. It cannot grow well. It bends in the middle. But it tries hard to reach the sky (the Sun). What an interesting picture it is! A tree is standing between two neighbouring buildings. The tree is not straight(out of straight, bends in the middle), because it is affected by the buildings. But it struggles (tries its best) all the way to reach the sky (the Sun). *