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Don’t copy the sentences in the text. Use another word or phrase that has the same or similar meaning. Use different sentence structures to express the same idea. * ------写作指导 By No. 75 Middle School Zhu Qianyin 预测：阅读材料的体裁可以是说明文如实地说明一个现象，可以是一个记叙文，如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理，可以是一个新闻报道引发的一场争论，还可以是旗帜鲜明、说理性很强的文章。总之，让大家“有话想说，而且有话能说”。 “读写任务”的写作过程： 1）把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点 与意图； 2）概括阅读材料的观点（论证过程） 3）在“写作内容”的引导下写作。 第一步：分析阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意图。 以2007样题为例： 所给短文的说理思路如下：论点: 论据: 结论: （2）--（6）正面论据 （8）--（11）反面论据 （12）--（13） （1） 概括作者的说理过程：????阅读材料的观点是（1）可以概括为 Some people think that teachers should not correct students’ mistakes for them.其正面论据 （2）--（6）可以概括为 Children learn by comparing his behaviors, including language, with those of more skilled people. ?阅读材料的反面论据 （7）--（11）可以概括为Teachers’ frequent correction of students’ mistakes makes students unable to judge their own work.阅读材料的结论 （12）--（13）?可以概括为 So those people encourage students to learn by correcting their own mistakes instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers. 用自己的语言整理如下：1。The author tells us the importance of self-learning for children. Not only should the teacher help the students to correct their mistakes, but also they should depend themselves to correct their own mistakes. (33) 2。This passage discusses the importance of self-learning for children. Students should have the chance to correct their own mistakes, learn-by-doing and learn from each other, not just the teacher. (29 words) 3）The article gives the view that teachers should let students correct their mistakes by themselves. Students are able to correct their own mistakes and teachers’ frequent correction will make children unable to judge their own work. (35words) 4）Some people think students’ mistakes should be corrected by themselves and it is wrong for the teachers to do it for them too often in school. It will make the children dependent on the teachers.　(35 words) The author (The passage) discussed the benefit of extracurric