2009英语中考“书面表达”分析.ppt

2009英语中考“书面表达”分析 一、各区平均分 你叫李华,你校将开展一个题为“All about me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括： 1. 你的爱好； 2. 你的优点和缺点； 3. 用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。 注意：1. 词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 All about me My name is Li Hua and I’m from Class 2 Junior 3. … 二、2009中考“书面表达” 良好表现： 固定的搭配, 如：be good for, be proud of, help sb. with等 从句如：……so that……, not only…… but also…… 谚语：★Each coin has two sides. ★Practice makes perfect. ★An apple a day keeps the doctor away. ★Where there is a will there is a way 修辞： They can also increase our knowledge，broaden our minds and strengthen our character. Book is my good teacher and wise friend. 连词和从句： ①I am a boy who is not only helpful but also clever. ②Although I do a bit worse in maths, I’m still working hard at it ③I should try my best to study so that I will make our country more and more beautiful! ④To sum up, I’m convinced that I can become an excellent student. ⑤I work hard at study. In my heart, it is the key to a better life. ⑥… because running can let me forget many things that I don’t know from the books. 不足方面 拼写： piano → paino strong → stronge tired→ tried because → beause/beacus/beause favourite → havite/favitous housework → houeswork/housework lazy → laizy feel→ fell sad → said frist → first prize → pirce competition → comptition hobby→ hoddy advantage →adventage/ aventure 滥用be动词： My mother are go out. I think my classmates are love me too. 乱用词语： Your live is very happy. So I can easy to make friends. It is bad for your healthy. 中国式表达： ⑴ I very like swimming. ⑵ My hobby is read books and play guitar. ⑶ She found me to work out the problem ⑷ Say say my bad habits. ⑸ have one day （有一天）good dot（优点） 三、对2010教学建议 1. 帮助学生了解文章内容，分析文章体裁，明确文章语境，初定文章的中心与脉络。 2. 强化基础写作，多教会学生写完整句子（主谓宾齐全），强调简单句五种基本句型的正确表述。对于中下水平的学生，鼓励他们多用简单句句式。 3. 帮助学生尽可能掌握英语的习惯表达法，积累词汇。各种语态的训练要加强，强调介词的应用。 4. 教学生套用一些套路的连接词，如：first of all, What’s more, f