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1.毅力与恒心 Directions： Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay， you should 1describe the drawing briefly， 2explain its intended meaning， and then 3give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points） 背诵范文及高分语言和结构点评 As we can see from the picture， a disabled young man is making efforts to climb a hill. By the sweats all over his face， we may deduce that he may have a hard time before. But with his austere perseverance， he is close to his destination：the top of the hill. However， the meaning of the picture goes beyond mountain climbing. ①Rather， it proves that perseverance is a great element of success： those who persevere will win in the long run because their silent power grows irresistibly greater with time. According to recent studies， the quality many successful people share is persistence. They are willing to spend more time accomplishing a task and to persevere in the face of many difficult odds. ②Helen Keller is a proof that great things can happen to everyone， even though he or she may be handicapped， if he or she works hard and never gives up. ③Helen was born blind and deaf. However， throughout all her life， she never lost her heart. Instead， she kept on learning how to read and write and later became a very famous writer. Whether you are strong or weak， you must keep fighting to succeed. ④No matter who you are or what your position is， you must keep fighting for what you want to achieve. ⑤Permanence， perseverance and persistence in spite of all obstacles， discouragements， and impossibilities： it is this that in all things distinguishes the strong soul from the weak. ①“坚持”的不同表示persist和persevere， 学习本文，应注意掌握“坚持”的相关单词的使用方法。在表示坚持做某事时，persist后加in doing sth.而persevere的形式为persevere to do sth. ②文中表示“残疾”的单词有disabled和handicapped。 disabled主要是指肢体上的残疾而丧失某种能力，handicapped则表示生理上的缺陷和智力上的不健全。在日常写作练习中应注意辨别其正确的用法。 ③表示某人天生就……的短语：sb. be born+adj； 文中的用法为Helen was born blind and deaf.这个句子还可以说成Helen was a born b