中考专题书面表达.ppt

But he didn’t hear me and rode away. But he rode too fast to hear me. 09年台州市中考作文 A(An)_____________place to go! We have different ideas about how to make Mount Feng a travel spotlight. My classmate Liu Ying thinks it’s a good way to plant fruit trees on the mountain, where the visitors can pick fruits by themselves and eat them for free. Li Ping comes up with the idea that an amusement park can be built there to make the visitors relaxed and enjoyable. Besides, it helps keep them strong and healthy. In my view, building a lake will make it touristy. The visitors can not only enjoy the clean water in the lake, but also go swimming, fishing and boating in it. 具体步骤 5. 写全文 写短文时要做到以下几个方面： （4）适当调整各要点之间的顺序，使文章行文结构更流畅。 具体步骤 6. 检查 检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： （1）看字数是否达到要求。看有无遗漏要点。 （2）看文体格式是否正确规范。 （3）看词语使用是否正确，有无语法或用词上的错误。 （4）注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。 （5）看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 具体步骤 7.誊写 考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。 假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。 ? 1. 看电影的路上 2. 发现有人丢箱 3. 高喊失主 4. 乘车追赶 5. 以钱相谢：拒收 6. 走远了 审题 体裁： 格式： 人物： 时间： 地点: 主体时态： 记叙文 日记(左上角是日期、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况) 第一人称 I Friday, May 3rd on the way to the cinema 一般过去时 今天下午我去看电影. go to a movie go to the cinema see a film It’s a fine day today. this afternoon I went to a movie happily this afternoon. 1. 看电影的路上 在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来. On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a man’s bike. on the way fall down from / fall off see / find + 复合宾语 2. 发现有人丢箱 我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了. I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didn’t hear me and rode away. pick up shout to ride away 3. 高喊失主 于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man. stop a taxi catch up with 4. 乘车追赶 我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他. 失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了. I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him. The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused. catch up with give back / return refuse 5. 以钱相谢：拒收 6. 走远了 May