写作的七项基本原则.ppt

一、语法错误 （一）句子结构错误 1． 主从句叠置 1) There are more and more students like to use the computer. 2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved. 2． 简单句叠置 I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend. 3． 从句叠置 As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. 4． 句子成分缺失 If work hard, we will surely be successful. 5． 语序错误 1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer? 2) I often wonder where have they got their money. （二）动词错误 1．时态错误 Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2．语态错误 1) I have excited several days at the news that you will come here. 2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall. 3．单复数错误 1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them. 2) Someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future. 4．非谓语动词错误 1) Let me to represent everyone to say “hello” to you. 2) Do exercise in the morning is good for one’s health. 3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot. 三）代词错误 1) We can use computers in doing everything you like. 2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own. （四）冠词错误 1) Horse is an useful animal. 2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004. （五）词性错误 1) I wish you can consider my suggests. 2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks. 二、用词错误 1) Students must know how to apply a computer. 2) People can touch many new things on the Internet. 3) The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall. 三、表达习惯错误 1) Why generated so large a change? 2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer. 3) A room often lives 6-8 students. 写作的七项基本原则:本文来自作文地带 一, 长 短 句原则 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用.而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual