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如何使用高级词汇和较多的语法结构 2009双语报17期B318期B3练习 书面表达的评分标准当中的第五挡（很好）的要求：“覆盖所有主要内容； 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接部分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。” 一．如何使用高级词汇 择词要准确贴切：避免用上位词来代替下位词，特别是形容词。 He is good man. He is wonderful/ excellent/ nice/ warm-hearted/light-heated/ kind-hearted. 使描写的事物更形象，具体化，贴切。 避免重复，富有变化。 The Beijing Olympic Games show that China can do something big and splendid. Also, they show that China ahs been becoming increasingly strong and powerful. They indicate that we Chinese people can do anything successfully as long as we hold together. Not Like—dislike, hate Lie in ----be located in, be situated in Be interested in ---show interest in / have interest in 表达新颖，寻求亮点。 More and more important--- increasingly important Because---owing to, due to Difficult--- challenging 短语替词，展示实力。 The boy realized the danger and began to run away. The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away. I have decided to study English better this term. I have made up my mind to study English better this term. I don’t know how to enlarge my vocabulary. I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary. We will consider the matter. We will take the matter into account/ consideration. One day when I was wandering on the street, I suddenly saw a restaurant. One day when I was wandering on the street, I suddenly caught sight of a restaurant. Watch him, or he might run away. Keep an eye on him, or he might ran away. It was my uncle who surprised me. It was my uncle who gave me a surprise. He suddenly cried. He suddenly burst into tears. 巧用习语，引人入胜。 He promised to show us around the city, but soon he ate his words. 引用谚语。 二．句子要简洁，用短语代替句子。 不定式短语。 You are so kind that you help me. You are so kind as to help me. It’s so kind of you to help me. He is so young that he can’t go to school. He is too young to go to school. 过去分词短语。 If it is heated to a high temperature, iron can be made into other things. If heated to a high temperature, iron can be made into other things. The teacher wal