《11月16日作文预测以及答案》.ppt

自我介绍一下： 李润生 @李威廉IELTS 南京大学与 美国霍普金斯大学硕士 教授雅思X年 网络小说写手 《公路局长》 《Watch 90后》 最精准和科学的提分方案 从4.5到5.5，从5.5到6.5，从6.5 到7.5 11月9(已考过）和16日写作如何过6.5 10句话摆平小作文7分 小作文： 饼图，柱图，流程图 18句话搞定大写作6.5 大作文： 教育类，科技类，社会生活类，政府政策类 光棍节来80128，看苍井空亲身教你如何“脱光”。看李老师教你怎么与雅思“分手” 《雅思写作各目标分数解决方案》 1，目标4.5分，避免迟到，走错教室，忘带身份证，吃的太饱，穿的太少，努力凑足字数，坚决坚持到考试最后一分钟， 2,目标5.5 就 只要靠背模板； 十大语法错误坚决不犯， 是的坚决不犯； 3,目标6.5，主要训练细化思维，避免讲话空洞，杜绝空洞；8大类话题词伙，每类背10个，共80个单词； 4，目标7分， 训练批判性思维，讲话有逻辑； 外加十个高分句型； 流程图范文 The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth. Once selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 600 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage. Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process. 流程图写作十大注意点 1，不要写祈使句 2，不要写IF , you 或者 A will…… 3，不要写过多情态动词（ maybe ,could ,因为都是客观的现实） 4一般用一般现在时的时态即可。 5，流程图需要在首段宏观介绍该图的目的，以及主要步骤的名称。 6，不要写跟图表作文本身没有关系的句子和表达。 7，尽量用被动语态去代替主动。 8，使用连接词 the first stage starts in the process of …. Followed by … next comes…. A last the last. 9，能否使用准确的动词表达是关键，并且动词是多样的最好。 能体现空间和时间的对比的作文是高分的作文。 各分数段要求 （第二段）先总后分的原则： ? 5 分的思维： ? The number of total production of electricity was 100 units in Australia in the year 1980 and was 170 units in the year 2000. Whereas, the figure of units of electricity by fuel source was 90 units in the year 1980 and that was 180 units in the year 2000. ? 6分的思维： ? The t