《Lesson 1 Note Writing (I)》.ppt

Note Writing (I) I) 新《大纲》2004版对便条写作的规定： 1. 分值：10分 2. 体裁：简单的应用文 3. 要求：根据所给的提示，在10分钟内写一篇50-60个单词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求格式正确、语言得体。 II) 十四年来便条写作的命题方式 格式：（占3分） 包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分，各占1分。其中每一部 分由正确写法和正确位置组成，各占本部分的0.5分。 2. 内容与语言 （占6分） 1)情景描述的语言，如2008年 “听说你要订阅英文报纸” 2)邀请、道歉、建议等的言语行为表达，如表建议 “I strongly recommended that…” 3)收据需用自己正确的语言表达，如完全抄提示扣分。 4)语言表达较差（包括语法和拼写错误），扣1到3分。 3. 语言得体性：（占1分） 语言风格与情境不一致，扣1分。如写给同学或朋友的便条用十分正式的敬体则不恰当。 *总体要求 1). 语言没有严重错误，格式对，内容完整，语言 得体，字数符合要求（80, 40）,可得9-10分。 2). 字数不合要求扣1分。 Directions: Write on Answering Sheet Two of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describe two features of the paper. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar, and appropriateness. Read the first sample and then give your evaluation. 1). Analysis: A. form[格式]: the spelling and the place of the time; there should be without comma after the signature. B. language: “think” should be “ think of”; “subscribing” should be “subscribing to”; “and” should be added between the last 2 simple sentences. C. content: there is no description of two features about the newspaper; the last sentence “you can consider and decide yourself” is meaningless here. D. words limit. 38 words 2). Total score: 3 Read sample 2 and then give your evaluation. April, 22, 2008 Dear Jane, Do you want to subscribe to a English newspaper? I suggest that you can have 21Century. It’s about Chinese news and latest matters and you can buy with others together, so that you can save some Money. What’s your opinion? Yours George 1). Analysis: A: Form: errors in date and signature. B: Content: the second point is about the way to save money not the feature of the newspaper.[题目要求描述报纸的两个特点，