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作文评分标准2分 — 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分 — 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分 — 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分：different views on fate. Some people think that fate is predestined (注定)and nobody can change it, while others argue that everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe all men are born equal and nobody is destined(adj. 注定的；命定的；去往…的 v. 注定（destine的过去式和过去分词） adj. 勤勉的；用功的，费尽心血的 humble or unlucky he may be. Just think of Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother and got seriously injured himself. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, “ Everybody is the architect of his own fortune.” 2．利弊类 家教的好处 家教的坏处 结论 Advantages and Disadvantages of Family Tutoring Recently more and more people begin to engage family tutors for their children. They argue that family tutoring brings several advantages. First, family tutoring can help weak students to keep up with others in class. Second, the society is developing at a high speed and family tutoring can help the child make preparations for the future competition. Family tutoring also brings many problems. Firstly, students may not welcome family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. Secondly, the quality of the teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. Finally, the student may depend too much on family tutoring and overlook learning at school. From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the disadvantages are more obvious. Teachers and parents should help students improve