ModuleDNAthesecretoflifePeriodFourReadingPractice(外研版选修)分析.ppt

(1) 根据写作要求可知，本文是就“看电视”发表自己的观点看法，提出倡议。语言应简明得体连贯。文章可分三段来表达，第一段以简练的语言简单介绍“看电视”的好处；第二段则着重笔墨列举“看电视”的坏处及影响；最后概括全文得出结论。 (2) 构思好文章的结构框架和中心后，我们应正确地选择与使用词汇。尽量合理、恰当地学习使用已学的高级词汇，避免生僻词汇、词组。另外，大胆运用一些连词和副词来润色文章，增强文章的逻辑性和表现力，更能体现出自己较强的语言运用能力。 【写作分析】 (3) 在体裁明确，思路清晰，推敲好词汇的基础上，应合理规划文章的层次段落，以锦上添花，使文章尽善尽美。 “No Television Day” Campaign TV nowadays is very universal，and everyone has access to it.TV makes it possible to keep track of current events and the latest developments in the world.By watching TV, we can enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons. However, every coin has two sides.Its reported that, on average, children watch between 30 and 35 hours of TV per week.It is bad for their health to watch too much TV.It will cause bad sight and overweight.Furthermore, it does harm to brain development if they watch TV for long hours.Whats worse, there are many TV programs that arent suitable for children. 【范文欣赏】 Therefore, parents should reduce the time their children spent in front of TV.So we would like to hold “No Television Day” campaign to call on families to switch off TVs on Sundays and go for a picnic or a walk to enjoy a wonderful day! 这是一篇非常好的作文材料。 1．文章使用了很多已学的高级词汇，大胆地使用了一些连词和副词来润色文章，增强了文章的逻辑性和表现力，更能体现出作者较强的语言功底。如：furthermore, therefore, overweight, whats worse, too much, have access to, keep track of, broaden ones horizons, on average, be suitable for, call on, switch off等。 【名师点津】 2．本文还使用了变化多端的句式结构，使得文章更加丰富多彩，文章结构更加连贯完整。 (1)形式宾语it的使用，能使句子结构简练清晰，重点突出： TV makes it possible to keep track of current events and the latest developments in the world. (2)使用形式主语it能够避免头重脚轻，增强语言的表现力： Its reported that, on average, children watch between 30 and 35 hours of TV per week. Its bad for their health to watch too much TV. (3)定语从句的使用，可以使文章的表达更加明确具体： There are many TV programs that arent suitable for children. Therefore, parents should reduce the time their children spen