高中写作训练之句型学习.ppt

正确连接分句 1. The book was interesting, I read it rapidly. The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly. 2. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor. 避免误置修饰语 3. At the age of six my father began to teach me English. My father began to teach me English when I was six. 4. I almost got good marks in every subject. I got good marks in almost every subject. 注意逻辑主语 5. To be well-informed, reading newspaper is a good habit. To be well-informed, we should read newspaper every day. 6. Coming out of the classroom, my heart was beating very fast. Coming out of the classroom, I felt my heart beating very fast. 避免指代不清 7. She asked her sister why she wasn’t invited to the party. She asked why her sister wasn’t invited to the party. She asked her sister, “Why wasn’t I invited to the party?” 避免人称代词混淆 8.We had been on the plane for eighteen hours, and you got pretty tired of sitting that long. We had been on the plane for eighteen hours, and we got pretty tired of sitting that long. 避免重复 9.In my opinion, I think we should ask them for advice. In my opinion, we should ask them for advice. I think we should ask them for advice. 尽量避免汉语干扰 10. The books in our library are getting more and more. There are more and more books in our library. The number of books in our library is getting bigger and bigger. 11. During staying in Beijing, I visited a lot of places of interest. During my stay in Beijing, I … While staying in Beijing, I … 12. There is a man wants to see you downstairs. A young man wants to see you downstairs. There is a man who wants to see you downstairs. 13. I will not forget my dear friends forever. I will never forget my dear friends. 14. They will come to visit you when you are convenient. They will come to visit you when it is convenient to you. They will come to visit you at your convenience. 注意时态一致 15. I went sho