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湛江市雅托英语培训中心 高等教育培训机构 电话：0759--2296349 网址： 地址：湛江市霞山区城市广场C幢1803室（即：沃尔玛超市的免费巴士候车处找电梯按门铃1803，上18楼） 第一章 普通培训类小作文（书信篇） 你是一位国际学生，而学校里却没有任何体育设施。要求你写信给附近一个体育俱乐部的经理，询问需要办理什么手续才能加入该俱乐部。 关键词汇分析 facility: 设施、设备 写作实例： Building a new childrens home will cost a lot of money, but be that as it may, there is an urgent need for the facility. inquire: 询问、咨询 写作实例： When the authorities inquired into his background, they found he had a criminal record. procedure: 程序、手续 写作实例： Social workers have standard procedures which they must follow when they are taking children away from their parents. ■ Main Body 1 交代“写信目的或原因”： 我写此信的目的，是为了询问需要什么样的手续才可以参加贵俱乐部。 I am writing to inquire about the procedures that are needed to join your sports club. ■ Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实一”： 我是一个来自中国的新生，在附近的皇家大学读书，离贵俱乐部只有两个街区。 As a new student from China, I study in the Royal College nearby, just two blocks away from your club. ■ Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实二”： 该校宣传手册上吹嘘有游泳池和灯光球场，但我失望地发现校园内无任何体育设施。 Attracted by their beautiful prospectus, which boasts of a large swimming pool and a spotlight tennis court, I discovered to my dismay that there are no sports facilities whatsoever on the campus. ■ Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实三”： 作为业余运动员的我实在难以容忍这样的局面，因此急于参加一个体育俱乐部。 Being an amateur athlete, I find this situation is almost intolerable and feel a strong urge to join a sports club immediately where I can participate in a wide range of sports activities. ■ Main Body 2 叙述“重要事实四”： 经朋友介绍了贵俱乐部的良好设施，我非常感兴趣，想了解办理入会的手续。 Impressed by what my friend told me about the excellent facilities in your club a few days ago, I am very interested in the standard procedures that I must follow before joining the club. ■ Main Body 3 阐明对收信人的“期望或盼望”： 如能寄给我一些宣传册子，使我了解入会细节，或附表让我进行填写，我将不胜感激。 I would appreciate it very much if you could send me some brochures and let me know the details or some forms for me to fill out. 你在当地的商店买了一台激光唱机，而几天后它竟然坏了。要求你写信给生产商，询问出了什么问题，并同时投诉店员的不良态度。另外，告诉他们该如何补救。 ◆ manufacturer: 生产商、制造商 写作实例： Over the years, they have