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实例分析与修改 笑气吸入分娩镇痛的临床观察与护理 （南京军区福州总医院 妇产科） 目的 观察分娩时笑气吸入后镇痛效果及其应用的护理。 方法 将2000年10月至2001年10月拟阴道分娩的初产妇120例随机分为两组，即观察组（笑气组）和对照组，比较两组分娩的镇痛效果和产程进展。 结果 观察组产妇组分娩时疼痛明显减轻，个别产妇有轻度副反应，但停止吸入笑气后立即消失。 结论 笑气吸入用于分娩镇痛的效果好，且产程相对缩短，对母婴无明显不良影响。 关健词：笑气；镇痛；分娩；护理 笑气吸入分娩镇痛的临床观察与护理 （南京军区福州总医院妇产科） The Observation of Effection and Nursing of Using Laughing Gas in Labor (Department of Obstetrics and Gynecology，Fuzhou General Hospital of Nanjing Military Command) 问题：1．用笑气干什么？2．effection？3. 读者不能从标题得到有关笑气的新信息 Revised: Nursing observation on analgesia of using laughing gas inhalation in labor 目的 观察分娩时笑气吸入后镇痛效果及其应用的护理。 Objective: We observe the effect and nursing of using laughing gas in labor. 问题：1. 时态 2. 观察笑气的什么作用？3. 观察你自己的护理？ 　 Revised: To observe the analgesic outcome of using laughing gas inhalation in labor and discuss the related nursing strategy. 方法 将2000年10月至2001年10月拟阴道分娩的初产妇120例随机分为两组，即观察组（笑气组）和对照组，比较两组分娩的镇痛效果和产程进展。 Methods: These vaginal delivery parturients were divided into the sections of observation (using laughing gas) and control between October 2000 and October 2001. 问题：1. 多少产妇？2. 时间所指？3. 笑气怎么使用？4. control group病人的性质，有无使用其他止痛措施？由此已经可以确认，这个研究是没有意义的。 Revised: 120 primigravid pregnant women undergoing vaginal delivery between Oct. 2000 and Oct. 2001 were divided into two groups: the laughing gas group, and the control group used … as analgesia according to the patients choice. The analgesic outcomes of the two groups were compared. 结果 观察组产妇组分娩时疼痛明显减轻，个别产妇有轻度副反应，但停止吸入笑气后立即消失。 Results: When the parturients using laughing gas in labor，their pain can be lessened obviously. some have secondary reactions ，such as dizziness and drowsiness. But the secondary reactions can be abolished only when we stopping using this gas 问题：1. When…句法错误 2. can be lessened: 究竟减轻没有？3. 什么叫secondary reactions? 4.只有当停用笑气后, 不良反应才消失，说明很严重，与结论是矛盾的。 Revised: Delivery pain was markedly relieved in the laughing gas group; mild adverse reactions such as dizziness and drowsiness were reported in individual patients