定语从句作文应用常犯的错误.ppt

一、在定语从句中加了多余的定语。如：误：Some?of?the?boys?I?invited?them?didn’t?come．? ? 2．误：The?book?that?you?need?it?is?in?the?library. 正： The?book?that?you?need?is?in?the?library． 你需要的书在图书馆里。? 析：应删去it，因为从句的宾语是关系代词that。?  二、把定语从句谓语动词的单、复数弄错。1．误：Anyone?who?break?the?law?will?be?punished 2．误：Those?who?has?finished?may?go?home　　 正：Those?who?have?finished?may?go?home 做完了的人现在可以回家。? 析：应改has为have，因为who指those，是复数。 3．误：He?is?the?only?one?of?the?teachers?who?know?French?in?our?school.? 　　 正：He?is?the?only?one?of?the?teachers?who?knows?French?in?our?school．? 他是我们学校中唯一懂法语的人。? 析：应改know为knows，因为one前有the?only之类限定词，定语从句在意义上修饰?的是the?only?one，是单数，而不是复数名词the?teachers。?　 4．误：This?is?one?of?the?rooms?that?is?free?now 三、误省略了定语从句中作主语的关系代词。如：?　　? 　　1．误：Children?eat?a?lot?of?sugar?often?have?bad?teeth．? ?　? 2．误：The?key?opens?the?bike?is?missing． 四、定语从句中加了多余的关系副词或介词。如：?　　? 　　1．误：The?house?where?he?lives?in?needs?repairing．? 　　 正：The?house?where?he?lives?needs?repairing．或：The?house?he?lives?in?needs?repairing他住的房子需要修理。? 析：应保留where，删去从句中的in，因为关系副词where在从句中作地点状语，in属多余。或删去关系副词where，因为where在这里的意思是in?which，否则介词in就重复了。 2．误：I?still?remember?the?day?on?when?I?first?came?to?Beijing．? 　　 正：I?still?remember?the?day?when?I?first?came?to?Beijing．?或：I?still?remember?the?day?on?which?I?first?came?to?Beijing．? 我仍记得我第一次来到北京那天的情景。? 析：应删去on，因为when在这里的意思是on?which，否则介词on就重复了，或把when改为which。?　? 五、在作先行词的时间名词或地点名词后错用了关系代词或关系副词。?　　? 　　1．误：I?still?remember?the?day?when?we?spent?together．? 　　 正：I?still?remember?the?day?that/which?we?spent?together．? 我仍记得我们在一起度过的日子。? 析：应改when为that或which，因为从句中谓语动词spent是及物动词，其后应跟宾语而不是时间状语。?　? 　　 2．误：This?is?the?house?where?we?lived?in?last?year．? 正：This?is?the?house?which/that?we?lived?in?last?year．? 这是我们去年住过的那个房子。? 析：应改where为which或that，因为从句谓语动词lived后有介词in，其后少介词宾语，而不是地点状语。? 六、在先行词reason后错用关系副词why。如：?　　? 　　1．误：Have?you?asked?her?for?the?reason?why?may?explain?her?absence？?　　 正：Have?you?asked?her?for?the?reason?that/which?may?explain?her?absence？?你是否向他问过可以解释他缺席的原因？? 析：应改why为t