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成功留学文书写作必指导之文化、家庭背景篇【精彩例文】写作要领： 　　不要因为光写自己的家庭、环境或者学校，而忽略了主角是自己，着重于将自己的所见、所感、所想和所做的事情与周边环境紧密结合起来。如果能与你希望申请的学校及其专业对你的强大吸引力结合起来，那再好不过。Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things)shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage.Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.My family is a community from which two of my most individualistic characteristics were cultivated: meticulousness and independence. My mother is a doctor who spends more time on her patients than on me but has taught me lessons from which I will benefit for a lifetime. Her seriousness with her work changed my attitude towards my own study and her avoidance of interference in my personal affairs allowed me to be independent. /zhenzhouliuxue000.Busy as she was, my mother still always found time to communicate with me. She once told me that when she was preparing an operation for a patient, she found a deadly mistake made by one of her colleagues and luckily corrected it at the last moment. Until then I hadn’ t understood the importance of my mother’ s profession and the necessity of being meticulous in whatever work one does. People are closely related in this society and others may suffer a lot due to one tiny mistake caused by carelessness.After knowing that my mother can save the life of a patient through her operations, I stopped complaining about her absence from home and began to take care of myself at an early age. In order to let my mother concentrate on her work I learned to do the cooking, tidying the room and to choosing the right medicine for my occasional illnesses. Gradually I got accustomed to making decisions on my own and dared to take the consequences of my choice.I now appreciate the education my family offered me and will do my best to carry on this tradition.【妈妈的影响】我成长的环境培养了我最显著的两个特质：谨慎和独立。我的妈妈是位医生，她和病人相处的时间远远多于和我相处的时间，然