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智课网TOEFL备考资料 托福写作范文：恒温动物 摘要： 托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，小马过河网托福频道为大家整理了托福写作范文：恒温动物。  托福 写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的 托福写作 范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下面，我们就来看一篇 托福写作范文 ：恒温动物。  这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作(关于恐龙是否是恒温动物)写的，虽然有一些小错误，但ETS评分为满分。  Sample Response  The professor actually contradicts the statements made in the passage. She is of the view that dinosaurs are not endotherms i.e. they were not able to keep their body temperature at a constant rate.  The professor contradicts the issue of dinosaurs being endothers based on the availability of fossils being available in thwe polar regions, she say that the polar regions in those days were not as cold as they are today i.e at least warm enough for dinosaurs to live. Durin harsh winters she says that there is a possibility of the dinosaurs actually migrating to warmer regions.  The issue of leg position and movement being used as a reason to clasify the dinosaurs as endotherms does not please the professor either. She says that dinosaurs had legs under their bodies to support their huge bodies i.e the legs under the body of the dinosaur were actually to support the huge weight of the dinosaur and not to provide it with a body structure like endotherms(which is actually suited for running).  The professor acknowledges the presence of haversian canals but also points out that that the fossils show the presence of growth rings. These rings occur due to the thickening of the bone. The thickening indicates that the dinosaurs werent actually growing continuously but were experiencing periods of rapid growth and periods of no growth in succesion. This pattern. she says is characteristic of non endothermic aanimals.  Thus it can be inferred that the professor challenges the passage by giving reasons as to why she thinks that the dinosaur is not an endotherm.  Description of Response:  Despite initial appearances, this response lar