托福独立写作body段论点句的写作方法.doc

独立写作body段论点句的写作方法 T.S（topic sentence） + development（论述）+ （conclusion） specific examples and details 范文：综合写作 T.S 必须能概括全段 必须只包含论证的一个方面（或一个原因） 不能过于笼统：first, English is very important (*)==English is very important when we are looking for a job. 不能过于详细：论点句简单粗暴，没有论证 TPO 17 Thesis statement: in USA, there will be fewer and fewer birds. Firstly, human population and settlements leads to the decrease of bird’s population 除了 观点，某些事实，名人名言也可以作为T.S使用 最无耻的是，某些both-agree的题目，改写题目也可以 【例】 Above all, the world today has become a global village, where not a single nation is isolated from others. In fact, diversified measures are being taken by the government to limit the use of cars. Firstly, emphasis should be placed on what has been suggested in the famous saying “interesting is the best teacher”. On the one hand, thanks to tremendous accomplishment of scientists in many fields, people’s lives have been made much simpler than in the past. 简单的判断方法——能否从论点句中推文章的核心观点？ ===》包括分论点和立场==》要将一个分论点同题目/立场相联系 论点句写作利器： 1》动名词做主语 2》结果状语的表达 A. Topic sentence(结论）的写法（形式角度） 分论点关键词+Cause make let +句 +Lead to, result in, contribute to，exert negative/positive effect on +词组 (Because of, result from, due to) +主观点的同义改写 分论点关键句+，which ....., making......, thus/so/so that +主观点的同义改写 【例】 young people today are more likely to help others than young people were in the past. 立场：disagree_年轻人不再乐于助人 (S.S) A 社会竞争压力大==》年轻人不乐于助人 B 社会风气不好==》年轻人不乐于助人 C 独生子女==》自私==》不乐于助人 The fierce social competition makes young people today be less likely to help others The fierce social competition exerts negative effect on young people’s mutual help The fierce social competition exerts negative effect on young people’s offering help to others. The bad social atmosphere results in young people’s being less likely to help others. There are less and less children in the modern family, making young people become selfish, which exert negative effect on young people’s offering help to others. There are le