九年级英语写作提高训练 -- A Healthy eating habit课件.ppt

审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写 卷面潦草一定要扣分! 书写规范 卷面整洁 Homework * * Teacher: STEEL rewriting 请你根据表格中的提示，以 A Healthy Eating Habit 书面表达 eat least 3-4 times a week 7-9 times a week 8-11 times a week every day junk food (不利于健康的食物) fish, meat fruit vegetables noodles, rice, milk, bread, eggs 为题写一篇短文。 要求： 1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容 2. 不少于80个词。 11 一、审题: 明确:是什么 (What) ？ 列题纲(outline) 1.读要求 (demands) 2.抓中心( grasp the main idea) 3.排结构(beginning-body-ending) eat least 3-4 times a week 7-9 times a week 8-11 times a week every day junk food (不利于健康的食物) fish, meat fruit vegetables noodles, rice, milk, bread, eggs 1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容。 2. 不少于80个词。 请你根据表格中的提示，以 A Healthy Eating Habit为题写一篇短文。 要求： 二.写作 4.Improving the passage(合理润饰 ) 1.words(字） noodles…. vegetable fruit fish, meat junk food food every day 8-11 times a week 7-9 times a week 3-4 times a week eat least Frequency(频率) Four Steps in Writing 2.sentences(扩展成句) 主 ------ 谓 ------宾 (状语） (We) (eat\have) food (1).We should eat noodles…. every day. (5). We should eat the junk food least. 3.paragraphs(组句谋篇) Eg: Reasons:1.Noodles can give us energy(能量)and heat. every day 三、检查找错: 1.单句改错 1.We are need a healthy eating habit. 2.Because it bad for your health. 3.Three meals is very important. 4.You eats some noodles. 5. We must have a breakfast every day . 6. good luck to you. (Str:主+谓+宾) ∧ is are G (Str：主+系+表) (Sv：主谓一致) (Sv：主谓一致) (A：冠词) (Cap：大写) Cap 大写字母 capital letterSp 拼写 spellingSV 主谓一致 subject-verb agreementStr句子结构sentence structure VT 动词时态 verb tenseP 标点 punctuationA 冠词 articleWW 错词 wrong wordNum 数 (=单数 / 复数) number (= singular / plural)∧缺成分 2.常见错误类型 3.改错完善;找出美言 交流合作cooperation A .Good sentences(好词好句） 1. ____________