翻译评分标准和技巧.ppt

多亏一位名叫后羿的神箭手射下了9个太阳，地球才被保住。 It was thanks to a skillful archer named Hou Yi that the Earth was saved. He shot down all but one of the suns. 汉语里有“9”这个数字，翻译过来，却只有一个数字one，但表示的意思却相同---剩下了一个太阳。翻译有时候就是这么奇特，没有特定的标准。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 为了奖励后羿，王母娘娘赐给后羿一种长生不老药，但是王母警告他必须正当使用。 王母娘娘：the Heavenly Queen Mother 长生不老药：Elixir of Immortality 正当使用某物：use sth. wisely As his reward, the Heavenly Queen Mother gave Hou Yi the Elixir of Immortality, but she warned him that he must use it wisely. 本句翻译很简单，中英翻译比较平衡。注意几个专有名词。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 然而后羿没有理会王母娘娘的警告，他被名利冲昏了头脑，变成了一个暴君。 没有理会（也就是忽视）：ignore 名利：fame and fortune 暴君：a tyrannical leader Hou Yi ignored her advice and, corrupted by fame and fortune, became a tyrannical leader. 翻译这个句子时，首先要考虑到用何种句式，能够使自己的翻译看起来清晰明了而不繁琐。这里用了and，连接两个动词过去式引导的分句。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 后羿美丽的妻子嫦娥对他的暴行再也不能袖手旁观，于是她偷走了后羿的长生不老药，飞到月亮上逃避后羿的狂怒。 袖手旁观：stand by Chang-Er, his beautiful wife, could no longer stand by and watch him abuse his power so she stole his Elixir and fled to the moon to escape his angry wrath. 本句翻译中用了两个and，来衔接句意，英语就是这么注重前后的衔接。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 从此就有了关于月宫仙子嫦娥，这个月亮上的美丽女人的传说。 And thus began the legend of the beautiful woman in the moon, the Moon Fairy. and thus began这个句首大家可以多用用。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 练习三：原文 在我的生活里，我也尝试过很多次试着放手。虽然，学会放手不会减轻生活里的伤痛或是改变什么，也不会让你的情绪得以发泄，也许你仍然会被生活所困。然而，富有同情心是一种释放。会让你和感受到你同情心的人得到精神上的洗礼。当你对一切都富有同情心时，你会发挥自己最大潜力。你也会在生活中觉得自己有无限的正能量。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 翻译 评分标准及翻译技巧 E