2015初中英语中考书面表达训练课件潘.ppt

书面表达六步法 一、中考中常见写作解题方法与技巧: 仔细审题，弄清题目要求，明确作文的中心思想，判断文章的类型: 写作分析 1. 这篇习作要求介绍足球明星贝克汉姆的人生经历，属于_______。 2.根据所给材料，我们可按___________依次进行介绍.最好分成三段写. 第六步 誊写 Practicing time （练习时间） One possible version（参考范文）： My favorite Star---Jackie Chan Do you know Jackie Chan, the famous movie star in the world. He has a big nose and short, curly black hair? He is my favorite star. His work is dangerous , but he is always trying his best to do well in his movies. I like his Chinese Kung Fu best. He often helps others that need help and gives his money to charities. He is very helpful .I have learnt a lot from him. Writing skills 一.审题 1. 主题， 2.几个要点； 3.人称、时态 句式； 4.要用哪些词语、句型表达； 二.写提纲 三.组织语言，联句成篇 1.上下文过渡词 because, or , but , and ,first, then,however , and so on… 2.最后有感而发的语句。 四．修改 1.信息点 2.单词拼写； 3时态、语态、主谓一致; 4.名词单复数、词组搭配; 5.词数; 6.表达式切换 7.标点符号. One possible version: Bill Smith is a businessman from Australia. He is 45 years old. He likes computer and music. (There are three people in his family.) His wife is a doctor and his son is a student. He works hard and carefully. He is kind-hearted/kind and helpful. Bill Smith has started two big factories in Fuzhou. With his help, ten poor children have finished their studies. He is sure that the Garden City—Fuzhou will be more and more beautiful and the people here will live a better life in the future. 3. 请以“I want to be a/an.…”为题写一篇 短文，词数60~80词。内容必须包括 提示中的三项要求，请不要使用真实 姓名及所在学校名称。 提示： ①What do you want to be? ②Why do you want to be a/an…? ③How can you make it come true? One possible version: I want to be an inventor Many people want to make their new ideas and wishes come true. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I just want to be an inventor. Inventions can change the world. They can bring fun and happiness to our life. And our fife will become better and better. Now I’m still a mid