科技英语写作中的典型错误2.ppt

例 64 汉语原句　根据上面对该多项式分解的分析，就得到了一种新颖的排列。 英语错句　On the basis of the analysis above to the decomposition of the polynomial, a novel kind of configuration is followed. 改正后的句子　On the basis of the above analysis of the decomposition of the polynomial, a novel configuration results. 例 65 汉语原句　本文论述了该系统的设计思路与结构，深入探讨了模型检验。 英语错句　This paper discussed designing ways and structure of the system and deeply discussed model testing. 改正后的句子　This paper discusses the design guiding for and the structure of the system, with a deep inquiry into model testing. 例 66 汉语原句　最后用计算机仿真对窗口损耗概率进行了分析。 英语错句　In the end, analysis of packet loss probability is presented by computer simulation. 改正后的句子　Finally, an analysis of packet loss probability is made by computer simulation. 例 67 汉语原句　通过与MEI方法进行对比，指出MEI方法中的第三假设值得商榷。 英语错句　After comparison with MEI method, it is shown that the third postulate of MEI method is questionable. 改正后的句子　A comparison with the MEI method shows that the third postulate in the MEI method is questionable（或is open to question）. 例 68 汉语原句　作者现在从事于计算机视觉、图像处理和识别的教学和研究工作。 英语错句　The author is engaged in the teaching and research of computer vision, image processing and recognition. 改正后的句子　The author is engaged in the teaching of and the research on computer vision, image processing and recognition. 例 69 汉语原句　最后，本文给出了有待于解决的几个问题。 英语错句　Finally, this paper presents several problems remain to be solved. 改正后的句子　Finally, this paper presents several problems which remain to be solved. 例 70 汉语原句　如果下面两个条件中任一个成立，那么我们就得到一个新的表达式。 英语错句　If any one of the following two conditions is held, then we have a new expression. 改正后的句子　If either of the following two conditions holds, then we have a new expression. 例 71 汉语原句　特别在无线电传输领域，这设备有许多优点。 英语错句　Specially in the field of radio transmission, there are many advantages with the device. 改正后的句子　Especially in the field of radio transmission, the device has many advantages. 例 72 汉语原句　本文所讲的内容对机械工程师来说是很感兴趣的。 英语错句　The content that this paper talk about is of great intere