从应试写作标准看句子意识培养.docVIP

从应试写作标准看句子意识培养 　　摘 要：本文以英语应试写作为研究对象，以句子的结构、过渡、多样化和流畅性为研究重点，目的在于增强英语写作者的句子意识，提高单句写作质量，以期促进其写作水平的整体提升。 　　关键词：句子意识 单句质量 　　中图分类号：G63 文献标识码：A 文章编号：1672-8882（2014）08-0-02 　　句子是段落、文章写作的基本构成要素，是写作者表达思想的最小语言单位。单句写作质量直接决定并制约着段落，甚至整个文章的优劣。在英语应试中，好的句子不仅要语法无误，拼写正确，结构严谨，语言规范，能准确、清晰地表达作者的写作意图和思想，也要在句子结构、衔接和流畅性等方面达到一定的标准。 　　一、应试写作评判标准及特点（以满分15分为例） 　　1. 13-15分档 　　特点：切题，表达准确、清楚，语句通顺、连贯性好，基本无语言错误，写的漂漂亮亮，读起来赏心悦目。 　　While the Internet has greatly impacted how to learn，education doesn’t simply means learning to acquire information because of the following two factors. On one hand，education is very inclusive，so leaning to obtain message is usually a part of it. If we overemphasize students’ ability of acquiring information，we will fail to educate the young to be developed fully. On the other hand，it is only a passive way of learning to obtain information，which do not parallel to creative thinking that is essential for education. 　　2. 10-12分档 　　特点：切题，表达清清楚楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误，如人称、搭配、用词不当等，句子结构一般无错。 　　However，education will never simply mean learning to obtain information. There are several reasons for it. Firstly，education includes not only gaining more knowledge but also improving comprehensive skills. Secondly，information provided on the internet consists of positive and negative parts，and it’s difficult for you to make sure what you absorbed is useful. What’s more，education can be compared to a building while information makes the basis，necessary but uncomplete. We should absorb more things from our daily life and practical experience. 　　3. 7-9分档 　　及格档，特点：马马虎虎，基本切题，有些地方思想表达不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，隔三差五有错句且严重，有基本的句子构建能力，句子意识较强，主干大部分正确。 　　But I firmly believe that we must learn in school even the Internet is fast and good. I trust that people can get a amount of information in Internet，in other words，education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information，Some reasons about it. 　　4. 4-6 分档 　　特点：稀里糊涂，基本切题，思想表达不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误，隔三差五找对句。 　　To sum up，I cling to believe that e