大学英语四级———作文解析.ppt

An Opening Speech  Ladies and Gentlemen, Good morning! I am Oscar, the spokesman of the Students’ Union. On behalf of the Students’ Union, the main organizer of today’s sports meeting, I welcome you all to the beautiful stadium. After two months’ preparation, our annual sports meeting is held on schedule. Thanks to the support and help from our school leaders and teachers. Though they have many school responsibilities, they have taken time off to take part in our sports activities. Let’s give them a big hand. Through sports, we can not only develop our physical prowess, but also promote social and emotional skills, and even intellectual skills, which will matter in our future lives substantially. So hope everybody here cherish this opportunity and enjoy it. At last, best wishes for the success of the sports meeting and best wishes for the good results of our athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of the sports meeting. Thank you and good luck! Thank You! L/O/G/O ThemegalleryPowerTemplate 大学英语四级写作新评分标准 2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分--基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分--基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。 　 大学英语四级写作新评分标准 　除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑以下三个因素： 　　l．白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。 　　2. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词 扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面 上已给主题句。 　　3．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。  一、人称 1.少用I，we, they,当想用 some people that….多用sth is widely assumed/believed that… 2. 人称要一致， 用we,they 等，一用到底，切忌some people –they—we– I 时态—— 1.一般现在时为主体 2.使用悬垂结构 A. To catch up with this development, we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. B. Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a lot of things you have to think about as you try to decide what you would like to do. 议论文的灵魂——观点（Arguments） 考察我们的观点及对社会上的一些事情的看法和改进的措施 ?如2002年6月的图表分析题Students Use of Computers ????2003年1月的It Pays to Be Honest,暗合那几年风靡一时的高考作文题目《诚信》 ??