高三复习英语写作课件.ppt

To polish your writing 让你的作文“亮”起来 Teaching aims words phrases sentence patterns passage ? language structure content 书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档（21-25分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务: 准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（16-20分） 完成了试题规定的任务: 比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容 应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（11-15分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 能说出短文的基本内容，但逻辑关系较混乱，要点有遗漏， 没有写自己的认识 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，但不影响理解 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 Let’s look at ourselves 读文找错因 ? ? ? ? 1 Can not use set phrases correctly On (the) one hand …On the other hand treat sb as ? 2 Ignore the part of word wrong English is interest It is no true true English is interesting It is not true ? Can not divide the whole passage into paragraphs correctly 4 Can not use some linking words correctly. 5 Handwriting is poor ? 研读促提升 What makes a good composition? A good composition is usually made up of an introduction paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a conclusion paragraph. Introduction paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Body Supporting Paragraph 2 Conclusion paragraph Personally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that ...  What makes a good paragraph? A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences. There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all… topic sentence Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you