如何写好段落拓展句.ppt

谈论你个人对网上购物的看法。 (主题句—引入看法) In my view, we must have a positive attitude towards online shopping. On one hand, online shopping has its advantages. Firstly, it is much cheaper. As far as I’m concerned, online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some don’t charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly, it is more convenient as customers needn’t walk store after store for what they like. And it’s easier for them to compare products online. On the other hand, online shopping has its disadvantages. In a way, it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. In addition, it is impossible to check the quality. Sometimes the goods we receive are not what we want, so we may be cheated and waste money. (拓展句—正反式+列举式) 谈论“互联网对人们生活带来的影响” (主题句）The Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. （拓展句）It not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides / Moreover, the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently. 就“诚信的重要性”的主题发表看法，要点1）你读后的感受。 （主题句-感受）After reading the story ,I feel it is important to be honest. (拓展句)It’s obvious that an honest person will definitely win the respect from others, which is of great importance in our study and daily life, let alone in the business world. However, a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is, dishonesty will ruin his future. 就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故。 What can we do to avoid traffic accidents? As to drivers, careful driving is of great significance. Drivers should never try drunk driving. Moreover, they should keep their emotions under control and respect others. On the other hand, pedestrians and cyclists should strictly obey the traffic rules. Besides, they should value their own lives. 遇到举例的写作要点，有时虽能将思路展开，把故事的经过表述清楚，但往住缺乏生动性，因此，表达时可有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的描写及情感态度表达，使之达到锦上添花的效果。如： So upset was I that I was