2015年公开课短文改错课件.ppt

短文改错 梅江区嘉应中学 刘映明 2015年10月28日 Just find out the mistakes Task one Mr. Zhang is sixty years old and had retired . He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes lively . He usually made preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it . I was poor in biology . He often helps me with my study patient .With his help I made great progresses . He was very kind to his students . As an experienced teacher, he respected or loved by all the students. Have a check Mr. Zhang is sixty years old and had retired . He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes lively . He usually made us has good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time we made mistakes in our homework , he would ask us to correct it . I was poor in biology . He often helps me with helped them with my study patient . With his help I made great progresses . He was very kind to his students . As an experienced teacher , he respected or loved by all the students. progress was and patiently Make a summary in groups 1. had has 3.去掉the 2.our us 4. in with 时态 指代不一致 冠词 搭配 5. it them 代词 Task two 9. 增加was 6. helps helped 8. progresses progress 10. or and 时态 名词单复数 被动 连词错用 7. patient patiently 形容词副词错用 短文改错要注意: 动词形、名词数，注意形和副； 主谓、非谓动 ， 习惯用语要记住； 句子成分多分析，逻辑错误需关注； 冠介缺余常常现，连词误用逻辑辨； 数有基序，代有格，从句细辨引导词。 添加或删除的词通常是虚词。 ⑴ 少了一个词，要求添加的词有： ① 冠词：in countryside →in the countryside(2015课标I) As result→ As a result(2014课标I) ② 介词：listening music→ listening to music(2014课标II) ③ 连词：He had…, he was… →He had…, and he was(2013课标I) ④ 不定式符号：came see me→ came to see me(2007课标) ⑤ 物主代词：Tom saw parents→ Tom saw his parents(2015课标II) ⑵ 多了一个词，要求删除的词有：介词、冠词、连词、助动词、不定式符号to。 ① 冠词：In a fact→ In fact(2013课标I) all kinds of the flowers→ all kinds