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最后两句是表现iphone 4改善了的和新的功能, 因此范文中补充了两个细节with more powerful battery(第四句)和What is most amazing is that...(第五句), 使整个描述更有吸引力。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 最近, 你的英国笔友Jack的学校开展了选修课, 他来信询问你校选修课的开展情况。请你根据以下提示, 写一封回信介绍你校选修课情况。包括以下内容要点： 开展时间 科目 作业 考试 体会 每周三下午4：00-5：00，一个学期 1. 20门课程可供选择，包括中国文学简介， 电影鉴赏，书法等课程 2. 每学生可以报两门 没有作业，鼓励学生大量阅读相关书籍 论文方式 有趣，开拓眼界，有意义 参考词汇：选修课 elective course书法 calligraphy Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. [参考范文] Dear Bob， I am pleased to introduce to you the elective courses of our school. The elective courses are held from 4:00 to 5:00 in the afternoon every Wednesday, lasting a term. Every student can choose two subjects out of 20 according to their own interests, such as the Brief Introduction of Chinese Literature, the Appreciation of Movies, and Calligraphy. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. There is no homework for the elective courses, but students are encouraged to do a lot of related reading, which provides us with a platform for our development. No exams will be taken and instead students are required to write an essay. I like our selective courses because they are not only interesting and meaningful but also help to broaden my horizons. Yours， Li Hua Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. [精华点评] 这篇文章的写作内容是以表格形式呈现, 表格的内容都是片段而不是完整的句子, 因此往往省略主语, 考生在写作时候要注意避免句子不完整。因此, 考生可以考虑使用被动语态, 如范文中使用了“The elective courses are held...”, “students are encouraged to do...”, “No exams will be taken...students are required to...”等。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. * Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.