《基础写作常见问题及高考英文写作.ppt

基础写作常见问题 1、句子结构的错误 ① The heavy rain was not come for giving relief from drought（钰霞） ② people noticed that they cut plenty of trees for money is wrong and known the importance of trees.(梦辉） ③They were ever to cut down larges number of trees, which they felt regretted now, and determined  to plant more trees, green the mountain, stop from the people let it happen again （詹子婉） ④ People there decided to plant trees and make a forest, beautified the smooth hills, preventing the same kind disaster happening again. (钥） 2、实义词的形式变化（时态、语态、非谓语） ① Recently western area was raining heavily after the long dry weather （蔡茵） ② Recently it has a heavy rain in the west…(梦辉） 3、意义表达错误 People didn’t realize that the heavy rain give relief from drought rather than floods. 4、不合英语习惯  They were hard to stop the flood. There has a heavy rain. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 5、题意理解错误。用条文式(1.2.3….) 1. There is but one China and Taiwan is a part of China. 2. Taiwan, the biggest island, with a population of 22,000,000, lies to the southeast of Fujian Province. 3. It is a very beautiful island. 4. Riyuetan Pool and Mount Ali are very famous places of interest. 5. Now, many Taiwanese come to the mainland, they visit their relatives and friends, and many of them build factories and run shops. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 5、用词不当： …they regarded what they have done …the water disaster (flood) 拼写错误或笔误 …,which destroied the farmland …trees were importance for their living environment They regreted cutting down a lot of trees… …made up their mind to plante