《2014届高考英语人教版二轮复习课件基础写作第4讲如何写出完美片段.ppt

* 第四讲 如何写出完美片段 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 第四讲 如何写出完美片段 一、衔接自然——过渡巧妙 有的学生在作文中使用过多简单句，造成简单句堆砌；有 的写复杂句时，动辄用so, and, then, but, or, however, yet 等，非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的，反而使句子结构松 散、呆板。为了避免这种现象，可以通过使用连接词，尤 其是一些表示从属关系的连接词，如who, which, that, because, since, although, after, as, before, when, whenever, if, unless, as if等，不仅能够丰富句型，而且还能够把思想 表达得更清楚，意义更连贯。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. [句式升级]　 The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world, and in spring time it often overflows its banks, and the lives of many people are endangered. →The Mississippi River, which is one of the longest rivers in the world, often overflows its banks in spring time, endangering the lives of many people. [点睛]　第一句中用and把三个分句一贯到底；第二句中使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句，同时使用了现在分词短语作结果状语，语义更连贯，语言更流畅，句式更丰富。 第四讲 如何写出完美片段 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 第四讲 如何写出完美片段 二、长短交叉——张弛有度 在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式 的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用， 还可使用省略句等。长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。长句， 因为使用的定语、状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了 概念的内涵，所以比较精确、严密，但使用起来不够活泼 简便。短句，由于词数少，直截了当，一般比较简洁、明 快、有力，但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。在具体语言活 动中，最好长短句交替使用。这既体现了节奏上的要求， 也是意义上的需要。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 第四讲 如何写出完美片段 [句式升级]　We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. There are many trees along the streets. There is a clean river in the city. There are many fishes in the river. →Just imagine the beautiful surroundings when we make our cities greener. Green trees line the streets. A clean river winds through the city, in which there are a lot of fishes. [点睛]　第一段中的句子都是简单句，句型结构单一；第二段中的文字，有长句，也有短句，一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了；句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client