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高考阅卷作文评分细则： 1.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 2.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性，上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 3.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 4，如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 Step 3: How to beautify a passage … However, I will never forget the sports meeting on a hot Friday morning, and it has encouraged me a lot in my life afterwards. After we prepared for a long time, we, all of the students… Far beyond our expectation, our captain usually plays a vital role in the match but had his arm hurt. But all of us tried our best to perform the role … Our captain felt great sorry for the result and even cried. When our headteacher, Mr.Mo saw this, he comforted us softly and said… 2 . A small black digital camera lies on the shelf . No.3. Complex sentences People usually need to add the toothpaste every time using traditional toothbrush, and it is not convenient. （2014年,湖南高考） People like drinking juice. People can get many benefits from my magic cup. (2014年,湖南高考) More examples of complex sentences 1. It is universally acknowledged that…(大家都知道) 2. I firmly hold the belief that ... 3. There is no doubt that ... 4. What matters most is ... 5. Whatever the result is, the process is important. No.4 Passive voice eg: 1. Because I was seated at the back of the classroom, I couldnt see the blackboard clearly. 2. After we prepared for such a long time, we were sure that we would win the basketball match undoubtedly. 3. I was deeply touched by what he said and I believed that winning isn’t everything. 4. When he saw this, our headteacher Mr. Mo comforted us softly and said…（2013 年,湖南高考） 学生习作4. A basketball match scores:______ Many memories faded away. However, never will I forget the sports meeting on a hot Friday morning , which has encouraged me a lot in my life afterwards. Having prepared for such a long time, we, all of