Unit4composition(giveadvice).ppt

Dear Liu Yong, I am sorry to hear that you are so anxious recently. In fact it is very common among middle school students,so please dont worry. Now, I will give you some advice. Firstly, I think you’d better listen to music, do some sports and read some interesting books to relax yourself and relieve your stress. Secondly, communicating with your classmates is often very necessary for you. What’ s more, It helps a lot to ask your teachers for some advice， which can make you less stressed. In a word, please don’t regard your problem as a disaster. Just take it easy, and you will be as happy as a pig. Yours, Mike Homework Finish the writing and revise it carefully. Rewrite it on the paper.(仔细修改作文，在作业纸上重写一遍。) * Unit 4 Writing When some students are writing… My mom will never worry about(担心) my writing! Task： Writing 你的好朋友给你写了一封信，跟你说他最近遇到了问题，感到压力很大，晚上睡不着觉，请你用英语给他回信，给他一些适当的建议，字数60-80个字。 How do you write a composition? Before Writing While Writing After Writing 一想 二提 三扩 四改 审题，思考 提纲，结构 扩句/连接 修改/誊写 Task 1 How to write? Ⅰ Before Writing 1. Read and understand the request 2. Determine the tense and peson 3. Determine the structure 你的好朋友给你写了一封信，跟你说他最近遇到了问题，感到压力很大，晚上睡不着觉，请你用英语给他回信，给他一些适当的建议，字数60-80个字。 Let’s give a good structure(结构) to your writing. How to write? Structure Which one is better, A or B? ____________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Beginning Body Summary 开头---topic sentence 主题句 主体---有层次的展开 总结---主题再现 Notes 1.play sports. 2.hang out with friends. 3.talk to your friends or your teachers. 4. spend time alone. 5. play computer games 6. read books 7. eat food/sleep 8. watch movies o