复件howtolightupourcomposition.ppt

* * How to light up our composition good writing structure content language number handwriting … good What makes a good piece of writing? 假定你是李华，你刚参加在英国Moore High School 举行的“人与自然” 校际交流活动。回国后，你写信向组织者Mrs. Green 致谢；同时得知Mrs. Green即将到访，你将去机场迎接她。请你根据以下要点写一封信。 要点：1.表示感谢；2.参加“人与自然” 活动的收获；3.请对方告知航班以便接机。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 Item 1 Item 2 Item 3 handwriting: beautiful structure: ① ② ③ well organized ② ③ ④ ⑤ ⑥ ⑦ ⑧ ⑨ ⑩ number of words : about 100 (10 sentences) content: all included Item 1 Item 2 Item 3 language: advanced words varied sentences 24 塑造一个更好的你 What makes a good piece of writing? 4. language 2. structure 1. handwriting 3. content 塑造一个更好的你 How can we light up our composition? words and phrases language: structure: transitional words (过渡词) 塑造一个更好的你 sentences 3 paras (10 sentences) 塑造一个更好的你 2. like be fond of sth./enjoy doing… Words and phrases I am fond of/enjoy listening to music. I like music. 1. good great/wonderful/nice… Your painting is very good. Your painting is great/wonderful. 塑造一个更好的你 3. I think I suppose/In my opinion I think we should practice more. 4. be important be of importance The map is very important for us. The map is of great importance for us. Words and phrases In my opinion, we should practice more. 塑造一个更好的你 help sb. in fact pay attention to walk/read thank sb. think of sth. want to do try one’s best to Words and phrases 塑造一个更好的你 thank sb. Words and phrases show one’s thanks to sb./ appreciate do sb. a favor / give sb. a hand cover as a matter of fact focus on help sb. in fact pay attention to walk/read sth. 塑造一个更好的你 try one’s best to Words and phrases spare no effort to/do all that sb. can to come up with sth./sth. occurs to sb./It occurs to/hits /strikes sb. that… look forward to (doing)/long for sth. think of sth. want to do 塑造一个更好的你 Varied sentences What different sentence patterns can we use to improve writing? The young lady is our guide