1 优化子的四种常用方法.ppt

需要注意的是，我们在写作时，不要一味地追求复杂句型，能简则简，能用短语，就不用从句。在句式多样的前提下，尽量做到精练。 温馨提示: [例11]我到家后马上给他打电话。 [一般] After I got home, I called him at once. [较好] After getting home, I called him at once. * 优化句子的四种常用方法 篇章结构连贯的常用词语 整合信息的十种语言手段 优化句子的四种常用方法 一、同位语手段 二、运用并列句 三、运用短语 四、运用从句 此方法多用于介绍人物、事物或地点等。 [例1] 介绍事物(2008广东) 背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 Shooting, a means of survival originally, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. 同位语手段 [例2]介绍人物(2009广东) 时间: 上周末 对象: 眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题: 我国中小学生近视(eye-sightedness)问题 Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China. [例3]介绍地点 姓名：李华 身份：育才中学学生 职位：学生会主席 校址：你们大学附近 I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. 1.(翻译)李敏是个女孩子,今年18岁, 她在光华中学学习,她是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友。 运用 1. Li Ming, a girl of 18, my neighbour and my best friend, is studying in Guanghua Middle school. 2.(整合)Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province. It is located in the middle of Guangdong Province. It is the culture and economy center of Guangdong Province. 2. Guangzhou, the capital and the culture and economic center of Guangdong Province, is located in the middle of Guangdong. 3. (整合)Zhang Hai is male. He is 23 years old. He graduated from Hunan Normal University last year. 3. Zhang Hai , male, 23 years old, graduated from Hunan Normal University last year. [例6]我很惊讶，一切进展得那么顺利。 [一般] I was surprised. Everything went on very well. [高级] To my surprise, everything went on well. 运用短语 根据具体情况我们可以用现在分词、过去分词，介词短语、不定式短语等。 [例7]她回到舞厅。她寻找丢失的项链。 [一般] She went back. She wanted to find her lost necklace. [高级] She went back to find her lost necklace. [例8]故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语初学者的欢迎。 [一般] The stories are written in simple English. They are popular with English beginners [高级] Written in simple English, the stories are popular with English beginners. 9.He was ill. He didn’t go to school. 运用 用短语整合句子。 9. Being ill, he didn’t go to