高考写作专题g.ppt

　　写作要求： 　　1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容， 但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。3. 图片仅供参考。 你看完上面这则新闻故事后深有感触，决定在班上英语课前活动中做一个英语演讲。演讲的开头和结尾已为你写好，内容包括以下几点： 1. 以约30个词概括上面新闻故事的主要内容。 2. 以约120个词发表你的看法，内容包括： （1）这则新闻故事带给你的感受。（2）你认为主人公感动中国的最重要的原因是什么？为什么？（3）受到的启发并进行呼吁。 　　Boys and girls, 　　 Today I would like to begin my speech with Meng’s story. 　　 　　 That’s the end of my speech. Thank you. 检查 1.单词拼写 2.时态\语态 3.句子的衔接，过渡 4.主谓一致 5.动词的过去式, 过去分词 6.句子是否完整 The passage tells us Meng Peijie, aged 22, was elected as one of the ten people inspiring the nation. She has been looking after her paralyzed adoptive mother more than 10 years since eight. (34 words) I was deeply touched by her. How could she bear the burden and be so devoted to her duty? From those who are given the honor, we can see that they all have something in common. It is the strong sense of responsibility and deep love for what they do and who they care for. And in Meng’s case, as far as I’m concerned, she has both the qualities too. That’s why she has the courage to face all the hardships she meets with, whatever they are! It is responsibility as well as love that makes her elected. What the story reminds me of is that when you are greeted by hardships, don’t give up! Face them just like Meng. I believe , one day, you can also inspire the nation! 1、Finish the task writings. 2、Keep practising writing a summary every day. Homework 高考写作专题 ---读写任务写作技巧 Combine what is inside with what is outside , and you will get higher marks. 外在 1.卷面 ①涂改、胶带… 、黑洞 ②段首，以下对齐 ③线的作用 ④间距：单词/字母 2.字 quality quantity 3.标点，大小写，见基础 First Impressions 内在 审题 体裁 时态、人称、要点 提纲（outline） 高级语言 单词 用些被动 语篇的连接副词（使要点明确） 词组 句型 众所周知 应该 我认为 定从. n从. 倒装. 强调. 非谓语等 谚语 忌重复 (基本功) 句式多样化 连接副词 1）first, second, third, last 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3）to start with\ to begin with, first of all, furthermore, 4）besides, in addition, what’s more, last but not least 5）on one hand, on the other hand 6）