chingish 中式英语之鉴P166-167.pptVIP

P166-167 5) We should actively expend the scale of using foreign funds and introducing advanced technology. We should use foreign funds and introduce more advanced technology. 6) It is essential to introduce these measures so that the aim of rational (adj. 合理的；理性的) utilization ([,ju:tilaizei??n, -liz-]n. 利用，使用 )of grain may be achieved. It is essential to introduce these measures to ensure the rational use of grain. 7) We must take determined measures to correct this practice of bureaucratism ([bju?r?kr?tiz?m] n. 官僚主义；官僚作风), factionalism ([f?k??n?liz?m] n. 党派之争；党派主义；派别活动), and sectarianism ([sektε?ri?niz?m]n. 宗派主义；教派意识) in handling personnel, so that specially trained talents are assigned to the units that deserve them most. Analysis: “to correct this practice” is only the unnec. verb + noun form of “to eliminate”; “specially trained talents” is a form of chinglish ,so we should change it to be “persons with special training”. 8) Seeing that we had scored remarkable achievements in the transformation of the old society, some people began to show a varying degree of negligence (n. 疏忽；忽视；粗心大意 ) toward problems of class struggle. Analysis: “show a varying degree of negligence” is only the unnec. verb + unnec. noun + third word form of “to neglect”. 9) Yi pointed out that some automakers (n. 汽车制造商), facing rising inventories (n. 存货，存货清单；详细目录；财产清册 ), have encouraged their salesmen to sell cars for a much lower price than the price set in their contracts with trading companies. Analysis: 1.the repetition of “price” is not necessary, so it can be replaced by “one” which means the same thing. 10) The practice of hegemonism ([hiɡem?niz?m]n. 霸权主义 ) and use of power politics are the root cause of the turbulent international situation, and China is opposed to hegemonism and power politics. 11) In waging our struggle against the counterrevolutionary ([kaunt?,rev?lu:??n?ri] adj. 反革命的；反动的 ) elements, we must not involve those whose relationship with the counterrevolutionary