八年级上15写作课件.pptVIP

* ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ _____________________ Write a travel diary like Jane’s on Page 5. Use your notes in 3b. 3c 本文为写日记，因此应用一般过去时态。应注意动词的过去式形式。 回顾一下在3b中所回答的问题的情况，然后将这些句子按恰当的逻辑顺序排列在一起，形成条理清晰的一段文字。 可根据旅行经历再加一些恰当想像的句子。 再次，阅读一遍短文，看有没有错误的句子。 Wednesday, July 24th __________________________________________ __________________________________________ _________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ One possible version: I went to the beach on vacation with my parents. It was sunny and hot. We went swimming in the sea every day. We usually ate sea food. I liked the paragliding best. It was exciting. But I didn’t like the bus ride. It’s boring. I think the trip was exciting but tired. Now, it’s your turn. Try your best. ________________________________________ ________________________________________ ________________________________________ ________________________________________ Write a report about your good and bad habits. Say how often you do things. Use the report in 3a as an example. 3c 本文为写自己日常生活中的好习惯与坏习惯。因此，应用一般现在时态。 首先，应在将自己的好坏习惯列个清单，标明自己做这些事情的频率。 然后，依次将这些事情完整地表达出来。 最后，通读一遍自己的文章，看有没有错误的地方。 One possible version: Now, it’s your turn. Try your best. I have lots of good habits. I exercise every day. I always read books. I eat fruit every day. I drink milk twice a week. I never stay up late. But I have some bad habits, too. I always watch TV for two hours a day. I use the Internet twice a week. I hardly ever help with housework. I never go to the dentist. 1. 分析词汇，可分为长相，爱好，性格及学习品质。 2. 注意句子结构，介绍发型时，has … hair；介绍爱好时，likes …；其他可用 be + 形容词。 3. 适当运用 and 及 but。 写作指导： Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are best friends. Look at the chart on page 23 and compare them. 3a Wang Lingling’s b