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王维·《山居秋暝》英译 空山新雨后，天气晚来秋。 明月松间照，清泉石上流。 竹喧归浣女，莲动下渔舟。 随意春芳歇，王孙自可留。 ? Autumn Evening in My Mountain Abode Blank hills look pure as a recent rain refines, As dusk is falling autumn is felt in the bones. A silvery moon is shining through the pines, The limpid brooks are gurgling o’er the stones. Bamboos laugh out as girls from washing whirl, The lotus stirs where boats out fishing curl. The scents of spring may go; that’s Nature’s will. This season here attracts the noble still. ? （王宝童 译） ? Autumn Evening in the Mountains 英译：许渊冲 After fresh rain in mountains bare Autumn permeates evening air. Among pine-trees bright moonbeams peer; Over crystal stones flows water clear. Bamboos whisper of washer-maids; Lotus stirs when fishing boat wades. Though fragrant spring may pass away， Still here’s the place for you to stay. An Autumn Evening in my Villa Wang Wei ? In the empty mountains fresh after a shower, Autumn thickens with oncoming dusk— Tranquil moonlight glistening among pines, Crystal water bubbling over pebbles. The bamboo grove giggles —girls are back from washing; The lotuses rustle — a sampan is about to emerge. The year is insinuating autumn into the vernal splendour— But I wouldnt mind staying on, and on. ? （朱纯生 译） 評（唐）王維“送元二使安西”10 種英譯 渭城朝雨浥輕塵﹐客舍青青柳色新。勸君更盡一杯酒﹐西出陽關無故人。1) A Song At Weicheng 有的版本題為“渭城曲”A morning-rain has settled the dust in Weicheng; “輕”字漏譯Willows are green again in the tavern dooryard 原文無again﹐也未說在dooryardWait till we empty one more cup -- 意思有出入West of Yang Gate therell be no old friends. GATE無關隘之意(tr. by Witter Bynner )丙+2) A POEM OF DEPARTURE 錯譯Light rain is on the light dust 漏譯“渭城”The willows of the inn-yard Will be going greener and greener,應該一行。意思有出入But you, Sir, had better take wine ere your departure, 意思有出入For you will have no friends about you--ABOUT??YOU 多餘When you come to the gates of Go. 意思大有出入(tr. by Ezra Pound) 丁等3) Poem of Farewell 錯譯Morning rain on Weis city 不需sFalls in t