短文改错剖析与应对策略课件.ppt

短文改错剖析与应对策略 潜山中学：吴刘燕 1.保证句子结构完整 My father who works in a factory 2.谓语动词的时态和语态 Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has....（去掉been）（2015） I was only four when she passes away.（passes改为passed）（2013） My watch broke and I didn’t know what time it is. (is改为was) Since then，.....we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed.（had 改为 have）（2014） 句子的谓语时态必须依据句子的时间状语以及上下文来确定，语态必须根据主谓语的关系而定。 3.非谓语动词的考察也比较频繁，相对于谓语而言其实要简单一些，因为毕竟非谓语动词的形式就四种而已。（doing、done、to do) 介词后跟动名词，动名词，不定式做主宾表，固定的接动名词做宾语和接不定式做宾语的常用动词要牢记，and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时) Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge lunch and dinner...(have 改为having)(2013) After look at the toy for some time, he turned... （look改为looking） （2015） I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. （saw改为seeing，and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致） 4.名词的单复数，格的使用值得注意，注意much与many修饰名词是否误用。 The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.(airs改为air) Much rare animals are dying out.(Much改为Many) (2015) There are so much that we often share them...(much改为many，指代上文的tomotoes) ......for all these year......(year改为years) (2014) He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard...(shoulder改为shoulders) (2013) 5.形容词与副词，名词与形容词，动词与与之对应的名词之间的误用。尤其是形容词改为副词时注意特殊形式的变换，例如2015年Dad and I were terrible worried.,terrible 必须是去e加y,这类形容词平时可以做一个总结，我曾经专门做了一个这样的总结，现在这样的错误很少犯了，这次的二模是angry改成angrily. 另一方面，对于词性之间的转换，平时要求学生要熟记，现在的复习资料前面有一个单元单词汇总，比较注重这方面的培训。这次的二模中，..my trousers became dirt,...(dirt改为dirty),就是名词与与之对应的形容词之间的转换，还有14年的 The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.(taste改为tasty). 6.人称的变化 7.定语从句中关系代词、副词；并列句中的并列连词and/ or/but/so，尤其是逗号不能连接两个句子；主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether，尤其是汉语中的”尽管...，但是...”在英语中不能同时出现，例如 Although we allow tomato plants to.....,but we have never had...(but去掉或改成yet) （2014） Tired as we are, but we carry on climbing. (but去掉). 主从复合句主要看主从之间的关系和从句缺少的成分。对于定语从句，状语从句，名词从句的重要性和难易程度，我坚信各位同行前辈比我更清楚，讲解也很是透彻，我就不多做分析了。