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一、总述 人称时态，逻辑清楚； 关键词汇，动词第一； 组词成句，结构完整； 组句成文，连词增色； 此路不通，绕道迂回； 字迹工整，留好印象； 从句适量，总体把握； 要点齐全，高分有望。 二、写作步骤 1. 认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。 2. 确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。 3. 写完要点，但不随意发挥。 4. 先草稿，后抄写。 三、习作点评 [2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分) Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers. ﹒what exactly your hobby is; ﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby; ﹒why you enjoy your hobby; ﹒about your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1. 根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。 2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3. 词数60-80 [学生习作a] My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old . I became interested in reading books. I like needing books 。Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me 。how to be a good person . Books even can solve many 。problems for me . I will read more good books to improve myself. ①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。 ②also的位置应放在can之后。 [点评]：档次9-11分。 ①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 ②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述① ② ③问题。 ③有少量错误。 [学生习作b] My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable . When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough . So I began to read books by myself .little by little I became interested in reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true . ①开门见山、点题。 ②真情流露，理由充分。 ③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、 ④巧妙使用句型以表决心。 [点评]：档次13-14分。 ①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。 ②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。 ③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。 [高分突破] ①文体：记叙文。 ②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future。 ③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。 内容具有开放性，