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2013年大作文--看图表:某高校大学生兼职情况 p184第一段：数据图表引子：As described in the chart, we can see that（图表类的引子万能句）dramatic differences with regard tocollege students’ participation in part-time jobshave taken place in recent years. According to the figures above, 67.77% of freshmen do part-time jobs,while a growing number of sophomores and juniors are involved in work after class.Most surprisingly（逻辑词）/amazingly，the past few years it has witnessed a sharp increasethe highest percentage of participation in part-time jobs for seniors, who are going to graduate. And 88.24% of them are engaged in internship before they start to work. 最高明之处在于换词，这三句话怎么不重复--- 参加兼职工作。PS: 黑色划线部分为模版，黄色区域为自填内容。第二段核心：8个字变80个字原因： 1.获得经验 2. 提升自我价值提问：What accounts for the fact that students in the last year of college are the most likely to spend time in part- time jobs = seniors enjoy the highest percentage of participation in part- time jobs? = those differences=the changes?过渡：As far as I am concerned, there are 2 reasons, contributing to such a phenomenon.8个字变80个字：原因 --- 1.获得经验 2. 提升自我价值First of all, it is believed that more working experience will be gained if students are involved in part-time jobs after school. (被动句式) 固定补充句：As we know, such experience plays a crucial role in boosting the job opportunity after graduation.Secondly, studies have shown that students are able to improve their value, when they work as an intern and have access to experience in workplace.固定补充句：As a result, it makes seniors more likely to acquire a decent job after they leave school. 第三段：总结趋势From the above discussion, we may safely predict that this trend will continue in the forthcoming decade. 2012年员工满意度讲义第182页引子：As described in the chart, we can see that dramatic differenceswith regard to work satisfaction among employees with a wide range of ages have taken place. According to the figures above, none of people in their 40s show happiness to what they do in office, while a growing number of workers aged less than 40 get pleasures fro