凤凰国际英语 雅思强化作2大作文框架二与内容构思凤凰国际英语 雅思强化写作2大作文框架二与内容构思.ppt

雅思强化写作二 今日内容： 1）框架与论证结构补充 优缺点对比 一波三折 2）如何应对抽象话题 3）大作文开头、结尾方法汇总（结合框架结构） 论证框架补充1 Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressure”. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? 构思 开头段：转述题目 背景---转述题目---引起下文 第二段：积极的方面 段落中心句---第二个理由---第三个理由 第三段：消极的方面 段落中心句---第二个理由---第三个理由 结尾段：自己的观点 总结全文---自己的观点 Young people often feel the pressure from those of the same age around them. For example, youngsters may learn to smoke if they are surrounded by young smokers even though they are not aware why they smoke. This practice is defined as peer pressure, which is not uncommon among the young. As for advantages and disadvantages caused by this phenomenon, it should be viewed from wider perspectives. On the one hand, peer pressure may have many baneful effects on the young. To start with, peer pressure tends to encourage young people to imitate what others do regardless of whether it is right or wrong. For example, cutting classes is not a rare thing in today’s universities in China. Many people attribute this phenomenon to some factors such as boring classes and lack of supervision. However, as for many students, they just play truant because their peers do so. Moreover, peer pressure may cause some other serious consequences such as committing crimes. Young people tend to be immature and cannot make unbiased judgment about social conventions and laws. Under the influence of their friends or fellow students, they may learn some violent behaviors and even embark on the crime road. Finally, peer pressure may cause some negative psychological impacts on children. If a teenager fails to conform to his counterparts, he may be isolated from the others, which may hurt him psychologically. However, on the other hand, peer pressure, if put in an appropriate surrounding, may have some positive effects. For example, if a child is put in an environment where his friends devote themselves to study,