托福写作瞬间打动考官的10大开头..docx

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福写作瞬间打动考官的10大开头 摘要： 托福写作瞬间打动考官的10大开头，托福写作，是无定式而又有法的。所谓有法，指的是写作中的一些技巧，比如准确切题，切题角度，巧用典故等。在这里，小马学府将就写作的开头来谈谈写作技巧。 十大“害死人”的写作开头： “害死人” 托福 写作开头之一：废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。 Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important! “害死人” 托福写作 开头之二：中式英文人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。 Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。 “害死人”托福写作开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very diffi