SAT强化段写作环球北美考试院常志诚.ppt

SAT 强化段写作 环球北美考试院 常志诚 索引 一、SAT作文概述 二、题目举例 三、评分标准 一、SAT作文概述 1、Section 1 开篇，影响整体情绪 2、美国名牌大学的写作单项要求 Top 50 8分 Top 30 10分 - 中国学生高分低能现象——通过写作筛选 作文是英语整体能力的体现，考察语言思维，举例论证 一、SAT作文概述 3、奖学金——写论文的能力 - SAT vs TOEFL TOEFL：语言多，思维少 SAT：重视思辨，语言仅为基础 - 写作三大能力：语言表达能力，逻辑思维能力，文章修辞能力 Eg：语言表达和逻辑思维像一个苹果的核心，文章修辞像一个苹果的汁液 一、SAT作文概述 4、英语听说读写能力的区分： 听说：文盲也可 读写：well-educated people 写作能力与阅读、语法、词汇的集中体现，因此能力不是短期提高的； 对于中国学生，很多是听说文盲，但是能够读懂文章； SAT的要求是读懂文章，写好作文，与听说无关。 一、SAT作文概述 5、作文差的表现： 句子不通 通篇语法错误 拼写错误成堆 逻辑表达思想混乱，不知所云 一、SAT作文概述 6、诚信度：SAT作文与PS对比 SAT写作由美国教育考试院统一审阅，后将送达学生申请学校，供其参考 因此，作文和学生的PS不能相差许多——美国式思维，100%相信，但一旦怀疑，你将万劫不复 二、题目举例 Given the importance of human creativity, one would think it should have a high priority among our concerns. But if we look at the reality, we see a different picture. Basic scientific research is minimized in favor of immediate practical applications. The arts are increasingly seen as dispensable luxuries. Yet as competition heats up around the globe, exactly the opposite strategy is needed. Assignment: Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today? 分析： (1)题目组成：话题作文 三个难点： 题目看不懂 表达困难 字数不够 表达困难的四种情况： （2）时间分配：2’+1’+20’+2’ （3）字数要求：400w （4）基本结构：总分总 （5）评分方式：两个老师评判，各六分，相差2分以上由第三位老师复审 （6）算分标准 三、评分标准 SCORE OF 6 A typical essay effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons, and other evidence to support its position is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate, and apt vocabulary demonstrates meaningful variety in sentence structure is free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics 详析： Point 1: - effectively and insightfully develops a point of view on the issue and demonstrates outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons, and other evidence to support its position （1）effectively and insightfully: