短文写作单项讲解.ppt

短文写作单项讲解 主讲人：何福胜 教授 写作要求 应具备英语书面表达的初步能力，能够根据所给的提纲、情景或图表按要求写出相应的短文。所写短文要求主题明确，条理清楚，语言比较规范。写作速度应达到30分钟120词以上。 短文写作考题形式 本部分采用提纲、情景或图表作文的考试形式。考生应按照要求写出一篇120词以上的英语短文。本部分满分为15分，考试时间为30分钟。 判分原则 2分：条理不清，思路混乱。语言支离破碎，绝大部分句子有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语法错误。 8分：中心思想基本表达明确，基本切题，表达尚能理解，用词多处不正确。 11分：中心思想明确，切题，表达流畅，用词基本正确。 14分：中心思想明确，切题，表达流畅，用词恰当，无重大语法结构错误。 写作考试要点 - 目的与对象 1 Unity （切题） 2 Variety （多样化表达） 3 Coherence （连贯性） 4 Accuracy （语法准确性） 例题（6分篇） Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. In developing country. There are more and more smoker. Evenly including children. In china. We often see some smoker in the store, street and so on. In spite of government prohibite smoking in public occasion. Many heavy smokers say they cannot give up smoking. I have lots of friend to smoke. I once persuade them to give up smoking. But they answer: “In fact I want to give up smoking too. I have once tried to do it. Finally I found it is impossible to give up0 smoking.” It isn’t right. My father had been smoker for thirty years. Now he have gave up smoking. It’s well know. “There is a will, there is a way”. Cigarette smoking is a threat to health. In morden times, Health is money. Life short but work is much. For your healthy family, smoker must give up smoking. 例题（12分篇） Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. Many governments put severe restrictions on the product and sale of cigarettes. But still many people take it, and some of them are very young. It has been a social problem that all the world should deal with seriously. Many heavy smokers say that they can’t give up smoking. They complain that there is not an effective method to make them get rid of the habit. But in my view, what is really important is not the method but the will. They need a hard determination as well as a good method. Cigarette smoking is a threat to health. Studies have proved